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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
 by sparrow794 on 05/03/12 11:55
Finally got another mission out there. I hope you guys enjoy it.
It's story driven, so there is not a whole lot of combat. Any feedback, either here, or via the review system, is, of course, much appreciated.
If you can't find it, make sure you have become a 'Reviewer.' Even if you have done this in the past, you may need to re-do it. Until the mission gets 5 or more reviews, it won't show up for anyone who isn't an actual reviewer.
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
Ya know I am a big fan of the Foundry this is where I get my content fix on occasion, some very well done missions. Thanks for the mission I will run it and leave feedback accordingly...
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by CAPT Huckabee on 05/03/12 19:02
My only input is make it where your whole away team doesn't beam with you to ship and the brig. that's if u can
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by sparrow794 on 05/03/12 19:04
| HuckabeeNC wrote: | | My only input is make it where your whole away team doesn't beam with you to ship and the brig. that's if u can |
I don't think you can.
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by EvildeadXL on 05/03/12 19:35
I love the smell of napalm in the morning 
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by Anton Mercer on 05/03/12 20:42
| sparrow794 wrote: | | HuckabeeNC wrote: | | My only input is make it where your whole away team doesn't beam with you to ship and the brig. that's if u can |
I don't think you can. |
actually theres away to trick the spawn point into beaming your BOffs behind a wall if you place the spawn in a corner... not reliable though
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by sparrow794 on 05/04/12 2:49
Here's my advertisement on the STO boards:
| Quote: | Published as of 5/3/12:
A strange request to meet with a Federation Council Liaison leads to a mission deep behind Klingon lines.
This is a short, story driven mission that takes around 30 minutes to complete. It is set along the Klingon Front and I had three main goals as the author:
1. Grammatically sound and bug free at initial publishing
2. Simple storyline, based on a classic tale, that causes the player to question war in general
3. Have the player feel as though they are the main character of the story, and that they have fun playing through it.
In a sea of missions designed to either quickly complete the 'Investigate Officer Reports' on the one hand, and epic 6 part mini-series on the other, I wanted to create a standalone story that was enjoyable, thoughtful, and could be completed in a relatively short time frame.
Feedback is appreciated in any form, criticisms are welcome, and I hope you enjoy it! |
I want to thank those of you who have tried it so far, keep the feedback coming 
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by VADM pRett on 05/04/12 8:16
I've tried searching for it on the "Community Authored" tab as well as the "Review Content" tab. I've searched by title and author. I Stopped Reviewing and re-enabled reviewing and I can't get the mission to show up. Is there a minimum level for it? I'm currently looking for it with a Cdr 24 character.
EDIT: Yep, evidently it is level restricted; it showed up when I searched for it with p'Rett.
EDIT2: Completed and reviewed. Nicely done, sir.
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re: AWESOME
by Ganos Lal on 05/04/12 17:49
this is a wicked cool mission. i would love to cover some of the mechanics of things with you sometime. trying to get them to work myself.
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re: Re: AWESOME
by sparrow794 on 05/05/12 0:36
| Ganos Lal wrote: | | this is a wicked cool mission. i would love to cover some of the mechanics of things with you sometime. trying to get them to work myself. |
I'll answer whatever questions I can, just pull me aside sometime
Glad you liked it!
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by kid3366 on 05/20/12 17:22
This is one of the most well conceived Foundry missions i've played. My only complaint, and it's truly not a complaint, I would have liked to have it have been a bit longer. Well done, sir.
I'm a Joseph Conrad fan and love the "Heart of Darkness" nod. 
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re: Foundry Mission: Unbecoming
by sparrow794 on 06/27/14 12:40
I believe this mission is currently offline for the time being until I can revise and re-test it.
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